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Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Televisions and newspapers are two of the most significant sources of information for modern people, which may both contain some detailed information concerning crimes. Some people claim that the detailed account of committing crimes presented on these social media could bring about negative effects on society and thus should be limited. This, however, from my perspective, is an exaggeration. I am convinced that one should adopt different policies according to the situations.
【开头段的展开】背景句+题目改写+个人观点陈述
「词汇指导」
1.detailed information concerning crimes/ detailed account of committing crimes/ details about crimes 关于犯罪的细节信息
2. bring about negative effects on/ adversely affect/ have adverse impacts on 对……产生不利影响
3. I am convinced 我相信
4.from one's perspective 在某人看来
For one thing, when it comes to newspapers or television programmes intended for adults, information related to crimes can be allowed. Adults are capable of making judgments on what is right or wrong. Being exposed to the details of crimes enables adults to know more about the ways in which crimes are committed, which will help them to distinguish and avoid the potential traps. Seldom will they choose to mimic what the wrongdoers do.
That being said, the detailed description of crimes should be strictly regulated in the shows and columns specifically designed for children, who are more likely to imitate the deeds and do something negative to society. Kids, curious in nature, once presented with much information with regard to crimes, may be induced to do the same. This, undeniably, pose risks to other kids or other members of the society.
【主体段的展开】主体句（Topic sentence）+支撑句（Supporting sentences）
【支撑句的展开方式】因果，举例，对比，类比，让步，假设
「词汇指导」
1.When it comes to 当提到……时
2.television programmes intended for adults /children 专门面向成年人/儿童的电视节目
3.information related to crimes 与犯罪有关的信息
4.be capable of doing sth. 有能力做某事
5.make judgements on what is right or wrong 能判断对错
6.enable sb. to know more about the ways in which crimes are committed 让某人更多地了解犯罪手段
7.distinguish and avoid the potential traps 识别和规避潜在陷阱
8.mimic what the wrongdoers do 模仿错误行为
9.shows and columns specifically designed for children 专门面向儿童的节目和栏目
10.be curious in nature 天性好奇
11.once presented with much information with regard to crimes 一旦过多接触犯罪信息
12.be induced to do the same被引诱做相同的事情
To sum up, whether strict rules restricting the description of what criminals have done should be established or not depends on the situations and the target audience.
【总结段】总结立场，不出现新信息，注意表达方式的多样化
whether...or not depends on the situations and the target audience 是否……取决于场景和目标受众
strict rules restricting the description of what criminals have done 严格限制犯罪细节描述的规则
