Summary
Ch.10 Bites & Pieces Part 1
本章的内容非常杂,有很多是写文章的基础知识,不限于nonfiction writing。
Verb: the active verb is strong than the passive verb. It could visualize the sentences and sounds more powerful.
Adverb & adjective: most adverbs and adjectives are unnecessary. 要找到更恰当的动词或形容词来表达,会让你的文章更有力量更准确。
Little qualifiers: be bold. 但我觉得总要使用量词,不是所有的事物都是绝对的。
Punctuation: use punctuation correctly.
Mood changer: but, yet, however, nevertheless, still, instead, thus, therefore, meanwhile, now, later, today, subsequently, etc.
不要使用会产生歧义的缩写,不要使用过长的名词短语,不要自己造词,不要过分夸张。
Writing is not a contest. Be yourself.
注意分段。
Vocabulary
scrap, morsel
This is a chapter of scraps and morsels.
scrap: a small piece of something or a small amount of information
morsel: a small piece of food; a small quantity
可以概括为fragment.
diminish, bold
Don’t diminish that belief. Don’t be kind of bold. Be bold.
diminish: to reduce or be reduced in size or importance
[造句] The house value diminished sharply in the past year.
bold: fearless of danger
inflate
Don’t inflate an incident to make it more outlandish than it actually was.
抬高,夸大;inflate也表示(使)充气,(使)膨胀。
outweight, hazard
The gains far outweigh the hazards.
outweigh: to exceed in weight, value, or importance
[造句] A study suggested that the benefits of cycling and walking outweigh the harms of the air pollution.
hazard:
n. something that is dangerous and likely to cause damage
[造句] Cycling on the footpath is a hazard to pedestrians.
v. to offer or present at a risk