(一)Introduction:引言/起始/淘金段
General description:总体描述 1句
Details:细节 1-2句
Caption:文字说明 1句
(二)Body:主体/拓展段,意义阐释段
Topic sentence:主题句。即symbolic meanings(象征寓意),1句
Argument:论证,3句
五大角度:background,facts,others'opiniins,consequence
六种手段:cause and effect,classification,definition and explanation,satistics and facts,exemplifications,cpmpare and contrast
联系现实
Summary:小结,1句 ,概括论述,总结本段。
(三)Conclusion结论段,建议措施段,总结本段。
concluding sentence:结论局,1句
suggestions:两点建议或两句评论,2句
包装结尾,展望未来:1句
图画范文模板
1.总体描述
eg:------------总体描述多用介词或则代词,如as,in,代词 It
As is vividly revealed in the cartoon.
The drawings vividly illustrate
It is vividly describled
In the picture above are....
2.图画细节
eg:
In one picture......,on the contracy.....
In the first drawing .....,by contrast
In the first photo,in the second picture.
In the left-handed cartoon.....on the contrary,in the right-handed portrary
3.文字描述
eg:主要为下列三种方式
The caption reads ,"love is like a lamp which is brighter in the darker places"
We are informed that "The flower growing in a greenhouse withstand the test of a storm"
Obiviously,it is teamwork that makes it possible for them to go anythere.
4.主题句---symbolic meaning
主要用以下三种方式,1.be to show 2.illustrate/show the meaning(最简单)
3.It代词
The symbolic meaning of the picture is to show us that importance should be attached to the widespread meaningless promises made by people in all walks of life.
The picture illustrates the real meaning of love,by stressing the fact that love is emotional strength,which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes.
It is apparent that the cartoonist aims to remind us of the importance of cooperation in our daily life.
5.论证手段:举例,对比,因果
五大角度,六种手段
五大角度BFORC
B-background
With globalization
With the speedy social and economic development
With the reform and openning-up in the recent decades in China.
This photo does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon in China now.
F-facts
This is no denying the fact that
O-others' opinion
在提出正方观点之前,可以先提出反方观点,并进行驳斥
When we use the word"love",we do not simply mean an attraction to a person of the oppositesex,
which is a very narrow definiton of the word.
Once a person stops making progress,he can hardly maintain his past glory and survive in this competitive world.
一旦一个人停止进步,他很难保持过去的荣耀并在这个充满竞争的世界中生存下去。
R-reasons
Owing to the quicking pace of life,competiton goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life,stimulating everyone to pursue one goal after one goal.
由于生活节奏加快,各行各业的竞争日益激烈,激励每一个人追求一个又一个目标。
C-consequences
Since the trend of globalization has become irresistible ,culture communication can effectively improve mutual understanding and friendship.
6.总结以上的论证 ,与主题句呼应
eg:
So with confidence and the right assessment of the difficulties,try and exert our strength,and then,we will overcome all problems.
That would be unfortune,because by becoming so addicted to the virtual world,we might never be exposed to social interactions.
would be将来时态
7.结论句
eg:
In my opinion,the best way to
As a consequence,it is imperative for us to take effective actions.
因此,我们急需采取有效措施
8.建议或评论
suggestions:---->多用代词和介词.如代词It,Hence,Admittedly
It is my view that .....
Hence,we should
Admittedly,
9.包装结尾,展望未来
Only in this way can we ......
It is persistent work that is conductive to your grasping a considerable vocabulary
只有长期学习才能有助于你掌握大量词汇。
It is high time that we solved this problem.
经典范文044
The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon in which a variety of promises have been arising from pepple in all walks of life. (1.总体描述)Regretfully,quite a lot of promises are sheer nonsenses,just as the hen in the given cartoon commits herself to laying eggs which are round without any angles and corners,and yet have shells ,eggs whites and yolks.(2.图画细节描述) 3.此段无文字描述
Odd and funny as they sound,such false promises can be seen and heared everywhere in our country .(4.主题句)Some administrationdepartmentspromise to perform their tasks effectively and fairly without taking any bribes;some manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality ;some commerial enterprises swear to privide genuine commodities and polite and enthusistic services.(5.举例论证)As a matter of fact,their intentions in making such commitments are nothing but to put on a civilized disguise to please or deceive the public.
(6.联系现实)
I dare say that corription and cheating are causing damage to society both material and morally.(7.结论句)But the hen and her like should know that dishonest behaviors help no one to survive the intense competition of a market economy system .They should rermember the old saying,"Honesty is the best policy"(8.建议或者评论)
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