英语图画作文笔记

(一)Introduction:引言/起始/淘金段

General description:总体描述 1句

Details:细节 1-2句

Caption:文字说明  1句

(二)Body:主体/拓展段,意义阐释段

Topic sentence:主题句。即symbolic meanings(象征寓意),1句

Argument:论证,3句

五大角度:background,facts,others'opiniins,consequence

六种手段:cause and effect,classification,definition and explanation,satistics and facts,exemplifications,cpmpare and contrast

联系现实

Summary:小结,1句 ,概括论述,总结本段。

(三)Conclusion结论段,建议措施段,总结本段。

concluding sentence:结论局,1句

suggestions:两点建议或两句评论,2句

包装结尾,展望未来:1句

图画范文模板

1.总体描述

eg:------------总体描述多用介词或则代词,如as,in,代词 It

As  is vividly revealed in the cartoon.

The  drawings  vividly illustrate

It is vividly describled 

In the picture above are....

2.图画细节

eg:

In one picture......,on the  contracy.....

In  the first drawing .....,by contrast

In the  first photo,in the second  picture.

In the left-handed cartoon.....on the  contrary,in the right-handed portrary

3.文字描述

eg:主要为下列三种方式

The  caption reads ,"love  is like a lamp which is brighter in the darker places"

We  are informed that "The flower growing  in a greenhouse withstand the test of  a storm"

Obiviously,it is teamwork that makes it possible for them  to go anythere.

4.主题句---symbolic meaning

主要用以下三种方式,1.be to show  2.illustrate/show the meaning(最简单)

3.It代词

The symbolic meaning of the picture is  to show us that importance should be attached to the widespread meaningless  promises made by people in all walks of life.

The picture illustrates the real meaning of love,by stressing the fact that love is emotional strength,which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes.

It is apparent that the cartoonist aims to remind us of the importance of cooperation in our daily life.

5.论证手段:举例,对比,因果

五大角度,六种手段

五大角度BFORC

B-background

With globalization

With the speedy social and economic development

With the reform and openning-up in the recent decades in China.

This photo  does  reflect a  thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon in China  now.

F-facts

This is no denying the fact that

O-others'  opinion

在提出正方观点之前,可以先提出反方观点,并进行驳斥

When we use the word"love",we do not  simply mean an attraction to a person of the oppositesex,

which is a very narrow definiton of the word.

Once  a  person stops  making progress,he can hardly maintain his past glory and survive in this competitive world.

一旦一个人停止进步,他很难保持过去的荣耀并在这个充满竞争的世界中生存下去。

R-reasons

Owing to the quicking pace of life,competiton goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life,stimulating everyone to pursue one goal  after one goal.

由于生活节奏加快,各行各业的竞争日益激烈,激励每一个人追求一个又一个目标。

C-consequences

Since  the trend of globalization has become irresistible ,culture communication can effectively  improve mutual understanding and friendship.

6.总结以上的论证 ,与主题句呼应

eg:

So with confidence and the right assessment of the difficulties,try and exert our strength,and then,we will  overcome all problems.

That would be unfortune,because by becoming so addicted to  the virtual world,we  might never be  exposed to social interactions.

would be将来时态

7.结论句

eg:

In my opinion,the best way to 

As a consequence,it is imperative for us to take effective actions.

因此,我们急需采取有效措施

8.建议或评论

suggestions:---->多用代词和介词.如代词It,Hence,Admittedly

It is my view  that .....

Hence,we  should

Admittedly,

9.包装结尾,展望未来

Only in this way can we  ......

It is persistent work that is conductive to your grasping a considerable vocabulary

只有长期学习才能有助于你掌握大量词汇。

It is high time  that we solved this problem.



经典范文044

The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon in which a variety of promises have been arising from pepple in all walks of life. (1.总体描述)Regretfully,quite a lot of promises are sheer nonsenses,just as the hen in the given cartoon commits herself to laying eggs which are round without any angles and corners,and yet have shells ,eggs whites and yolks.(2.图画细节描述) 3.此段无文字描述

Odd and funny as they sound,such false promises can be seen and heared everywhere in our country .(4.主题句)Some administrationdepartmentspromise to perform their tasks effectively and fairly without taking any bribes;some manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality ;some commerial enterprises swear to  privide genuine commodities  and polite and enthusistic services.(5.举例论证)As a  matter of fact,their intentions in making such commitments are nothing but to put on a civilized disguise to please or deceive the public.

(6.联系现实)


I dare say that corription and cheating are causing damage to society  both material and morally.(7.结论句)But the hen and her like should know that dishonest behaviors help no one to survive the intense competition of a market economy system .They should rermember the old saying,"Honesty is the best policy"(8.建议或者评论)

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