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1.作文类型：留言条
假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：
1.外出购物
2.替房东还书
3.Tracy 来电话留言：
1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消
2)此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Li Hua
2.作文类型：给朋友的信
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：
1.简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；
2.位置：天安门广场南面；
3.交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；
4.特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
参考词汇：
步行街 pedestrian street
当当车 trolley car
地铁 subway
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.
Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I’m sure you‘ll like it.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3.作文类型：介绍信
假设你是李华。你的外国笔友Jane打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国人的社交习俗。请你用英语回一封信，从以下几个方面作具体介绍。
1.见面时的问候方式；
2.对赞美时回答方式；
3.接收礼物时的回应方式；
4.餐宴礼节。
注意：
1.词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Jane,
Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China in July. The following are some Chinese customs.
Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” or “Are you busy?” to express our care. Secondly, when praised, we reply with “Oh, no!” or “I’m over-praised” to show good manners. Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say “It’s unnecessary” besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away. Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone’s health or success to show that we’re warm.
Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, you’ll enjoy more of your stay here.
I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
4.作文类型：演讲稿
假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。
演讲稿的主要内容应包括：
认为同学们不必为此苦恼;
希望能够体谅父母的苦衷;
建议与父母进行交流和沟通。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—thy are bound to read it.
Thank you!
5.作文类型：保护环境
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括：
1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.
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My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
