声明
因为英语不好而丢了脸(详情请看我2月15日的文章《关于英文写作刻意练习》)
所以本文是练习英语用的
故此文中含有许多错误
欢迎朋友们指正,不甚感谢
上一篇文章Good Body, Good Life存在的问题,感谢我的校友王荧老师指出:
原句:He have been a doctor for more than 20 years
修正:He has been a doctor for more than 20 years
原因:应为第三人称单数形式
原句:Mr.Smith is a kind-hearted man. He is respected.
修正:Mr.Smith is a so kind-hearted man that he is respected by many people.
原因:句式太零散
原句:Mr.Smith look over Mr.Wang's body with patient again and again. Finally, he come to a conclusion.
修正:Mr.Smith checked Mr.Wang's body with patience again and again. Finally, he came to a conclusion.
原因:检查身体不用look over,而是用check;形容词patient改为名词patience;应为过去时态
原句:Mr.Wang would be careful of his diet in the future
修正:Mr.Wang should be careful of his diet in the future
原因:should:应该
原句:Without health, we can't work well, at least, your efficiency will be much lower.
修正:Without health, we can't work well. At least, your efficiency will be much lower.
原因:前后是两句完整的话,故well后面用句号,at首字母大写。
原句:I hope all of you have a good health and enjoying life
修正:I hope all of you have a good health and enjoy life
原因:hope sb do sth
今日练习:看图作文(请原谅这诡异的画风,我选资料时没有注意。)
Friendship Lasts Forever
Tom and Mary are good friends. They were neighbors so they grew up together when they were children. They have good friendships.
One day, Tom's family made a move to another city. He had to leave the place which he lived for 15 years. And also, he had to say goodbye to Mary.
Yesterday morning, Mary got a phone call. It was Tom. He invited Mary to his new house to have dinner. But Mary didn't know how to get there, so she asked Tom the way to his home. Tom told Mary how she can get to his home patiently. However, Mary was confused because she has no sense of direction.
Fortunately, Mary is a clever girl. Each time when she was lost, she asked the policeman for help.
The policeman told Mary to "go down this street until the end", then Mary go down this street until the end. The second policeman told Mary to "turn to the left at the first cross", then Mary turn to the left at the first cross.
At last, the 17th policeman told Mary to "walk along the road and when you see the second building on your left, it is the house you are looking forward, you can't miss it", then Mary get to Tom's new house.
Tom was very glad to see Mary again. They had dinner together, and they talked a lot. The whole house filled with laughter.
Nothing has changed, their friendships last forever.
中文
友谊地久天长
Tom和Mary是好朋友。他们曾是邻居,所以他俩从小一起长大。他们的关系好极了。
有一天,Tom举家搬去另一座城市。他不得不离开这个他生活了15年的地方。同时,他也不得不向Mary告别了。
昨天早上,Mary接到一个电话。是Tom打来的,他邀请Mary来他的新家做客。但是Mary并不知道该如何去到Tom那里,所以她让Tom告诉自己该怎么走。Tom耐心的和Mary讲解该如何来他家。然而Mary还是一头雾水,因为她路痴。
还好,Mary是一个机灵的姑娘。每当她感觉迷路了,她就会向警察寻求帮助。
警察告诉Mary“沿着这条路一直走到底”,Mary就沿着这条路一直走到底。第二个警察告诉Mary“第一个十字路口向左拐”,Mary就第一个十字路口向左拐。
最后,第17个警察告诉Mary“顺着这条路走,你在左边看到的第二个建筑就是你要找的房子,你一定能找到的。”然后Mary就到了Tom的新家。
再次看到Mary,Tom很高兴。他们一起吃晚饭,聊了很多很多。整个屋子里充满了欢声笑语。
一切都还是原来的样子,他们的友谊地久天长。