首段---个人观点
1. 基本款(一个观点):
Personally/ as far as I am concerned/ for my part
I agree/ disagree with
升级版(一个观点之倾向):
should be encouraged
it is better to do sth.
...could benefit more from...
升级版(一个观点之不同意):
there are some facts indicating that this opinion seems far-fetched
there are indications that... has brought various drawbacks
the drawbacks of.... deserve people's greatest attention
2. 转折句:
While, although
Although wome people are of the opinion that.....,I insist that...
However
Some people are of the opinion tthat,,,Howeve, I ....
首段结构回顾:
引入话题
题目改写
自己观点
主体段
段内结构、段间关系
1.段内结构:
topic sentence + supporting details
Topic sentence
位置 形式 注意
段首 直接给出&回应主题 每段不重复
如何写TS:
Identify topic key words
Brainstorm( words/ phrases):观点在.....方面的好处/坏处/原因
Sort the most relevantideas intoa sentence
段落展开:
2. 段间关系
分段方法:
让 驳
让 驳驳
段间逻辑:
让步 转折 并列
条件论证:
比较论证:
尾段:
作业:
作文写在Real skill上