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  • @STAR_周星驰 好的

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    01-02 intro My name is Zhou Xingchi it’s my pleasure to have the chance to introduce my...

  • 还不错,就是在语序的连贯要加强,还有句子与句子之间要有联系

    张嘉瑞 评论自02-03
  • 还不错,就是在语序的连贯要加强,还有句子与句子之间要有联系

    02-03

    Puppy Love Puppy love now becoming a common thing in middle school,even ...

  • puppy love

    puppy love is a common thing in our daily life. puppy love can describe the love or lu...

  • 很认真,暂时未发现错误

    Punctuations matter

    01-2 Intro. My name is Zhao Wenqi. My English name is Claudia. I'm 16 years old. I am ...

  • 很有条理性,图是最好的

    01-02 intro

    01-02 intro My name is Zhou Xingchi it’s my pleasure to have the chance to introduce my...

  • 有语法错误,进步很多

    01-2 Intro

    self introduction 01-2 Hello Mr Wang.My Chinese name is Tian Di ...

  • 2017-05-07

    First let me introduce ,my name is Zhang Jia rui,I come from xuzhou ,It's a beautiful a...