@STAR_周星驰 好的
01-02 intro01-02 intro My name is Zhou Xingchi it’s my pleasure to have the chance to introduce my...
@STAR_周星驰 好的
01-02 intro01-02 intro My name is Zhou Xingchi it’s my pleasure to have the chance to introduce my...
还不错,就是在语序的连贯要加强,还有句子与句子之间要有联系
还不错,就是在语序的连贯要加强,还有句子与句子之间要有联系
02-03Puppy Love Puppy love now becoming a common thing in middle school,even ...
puppy love is a common thing in our daily life. puppy love can describe the love or lu...
很认真,暂时未发现错误
Punctuations matter01-2 Intro. My name is Zhao Wenqi. My English name is Claudia. I'm 16 years old. I am ...
很有条理性,图是最好的
01-02 intro01-02 intro My name is Zhou Xingchi it’s my pleasure to have the chance to introduce my...
有语法错误,进步很多
01-2 Introself introduction 01-2 Hello Mr Wang.My Chinese name is Tian Di ...
First let me introduce ,my name is Zhang Jia rui,I come from xuzhou ,It's a beautiful a...